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Motorvatin' |
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fjones Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 98MS |
Down South we have many a salutation. "Morning, how r-u-doing?" Will bring inventive explanations. You may be sorry for pursing. "Only tolerable"is one reply. If so, this would be our fate- We probably won't die But we're ready to set the date! Maybe the answer is "Just fair." We are not great But not ready for the rocking chair. We're not in too bad a shape. "Loosing ground." Then we've been on top But now we've found We've lost our spot. Then there is "Fair-to-Middlen." You might say "just Ok." Sort of in the middle We're kind of blase. What we want to be is motorvatin'. Best of all states. Practically levitatin'. If only this were always our fate! [This message has been edited by fjones (edited 06-12-99).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
How would you say this in the south? fjones, the poem you wrote is great! Looking forward to your answer. |
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fjones Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 98MS |
Well, it would be something like this-- fjones, I surely did enjoy reading your little poem--It is the cutest thing! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
fjones I surely did enjoy reading your little poem - - it's the cutest little thing! How's your mom-en-em? |
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ashlerr Junior Member
since 1999-06-11
Posts 23chino hills, ca usa |
i am unfamiliar with the style of content. but then again i am rather new to the whole poetry site. i did enjoy it. and even (if you dont mind me saying) got a good sense of humor from it. i look forward to reading more. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
howdy ma'am  ------------------ If Haydn is the father of symphonies...And Mozart is the son of symphonies...Then Beethoven is the god of symphonies!!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Now them folks know how to talk!!! LOL. Set a spell... take a load off! Definitely better than fair-to-middlin' work! |
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