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His Laughter in Her Mind
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His Laughter in Her Mind |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
She stood holding the back of the chair as his coffin was lowered into the hole she closed her eyes to the finality of losing a part of her soul. She felt his warm presence behind her and opened her eyes hoping to see his death was a hoax that someone created out of cruelty. Silently shedding tears of sorrow praying that she would be brave wondering how to go on without him as she stood here at his grave. The sun broke through the clouds and she felt his warmth inside felt his heart join hers as it beat and heard his laughter in her mind. She turned and gathered her children to her waiting motherly breast smiling, she told them their father was peacefully at rest. She walked away from the sadness seeking the future to find always feeling him in her his laughter in her mind. |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
How....how sad! That's a powerful poem poet....sigh..... I dunno how to make those tears dear.... but, I feel them. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Just beautiful, poet deVine - Just beautiful  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Poet, it is nice to find someone that shares my love of poetry with what appears to be true, heartfelt angst. |
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ac Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 129Cayey, PR - USA |
My best friend, my everything, committed suicide three years ago...when i was told i didn't believe anyone... i had to see him myself and even then it didn't seem real.. it took a year to get over that hallow feeling left behind... and to this day when i look up at the sky and see a blinking star i smile because it's his smile i feel in my heart... |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
such a lovely, touching tribute...thanks for sharing ------------------ Childhood Memories...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Few can touch emotions like you, deVine one. This is excellent. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You kind of reached inside me and gave my heart one big tug. Very moving. A |
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