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I Would Kiss You
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I Would Kiss You |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
I would kiss you as the sun does the morning sky. At first, so gently as give rise to a soft golw, Only to awaken your passion with a blazing kiss And with incrasing heat across your body, flow. Then drawing forth the fullness of your desire, Burning life into what lies below, There I'd light your heart with love's great fire. If I would kiss you, I would kiss you so. |
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invertigo18 Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 53Prairieville, LA., USA |
I liked this one alot. You take the reader into the journey of the heart. Something alot of people have trouble doing. I hope to read more of your work.  ------------------ Luke Cakalic |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
invertigo18 - Thanks for taking the time to read and respond. I'll seek to do the same. Andrew |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely! You've got a good style of writing. I intend to read some more of your work. |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
........ hmmmmm? Oh, yes...um. A kiss? Oh, yes. Well, we all enjoy those tender, passionate kisses. Very nice.  |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
He he he - my hard drive's smokin'....have you tried writing any erotic poetry? You'd be good I think...you're good at painting your ideas of even the smallest of moments... ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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blueloon Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 161NY |
I'm not really sure what to say except...I WANT A KISS LIKE THAT NOW, NOW, NOW! Please excuse my temper tantrum....that was really good! blueloon |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
great poem. awesome use of imagery. jfreak |
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Tinu New Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 7 |
Ah, romance is in the biggest, little things. And there is so much romance in a kiss! Kisses like those make you fall in love, then keep you there.... ------------------ The Best Poetry Sites- Decided by YOU www.fireseek.com |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Now that's the way to start a morning, or conclude the day. Lovely, inviting |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow.......would I to find someone that kissed like that, I think I might just be happy forever! ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Areya Junior Member
since 1999-06-26
Posts 16 |
Written with a true soul of a poet. Lovely. |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
Where does the line start??.. Save one of those for me please. yes yes yes mmm.. "shivvveeerrrr" |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Imagine my surprise to find this one dug up from the heap of so much great poetry. My special thanks to Poet Femme Fatale for taking the effort to do so. And to all whom have responded a kiss of thanks as well (Guys - If you just want to take a handshake, that's fine too). |
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