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ashlerr Junior Member
since 1999-06-11
Posts 23chino hills, ca usa |
overcast song, my tempest angel ring through my clouded breath tones carry the lyrics of life to bring the passage of death oh, sweet melody rapture i beseech you in respect bring soitude to its end with your holy dialect tear tone notes of chant blackens the once blue sky softens my restless spirit to ease me where i lie words from unknown gods sung through sirens lips enchant this weary soul buried in death's own crypts so long, too long ago was when i heard it last a tender sorrow tale that accompanies my past but now i will sing and release my heavy chains so i can live in harmony beneath the pouring rains fin.....ash [This message has been edited by ashlerr (edited 06-11-99).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Happy to see you with us... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow! I like this one! You've got some good imagery here. Welcome to the group! |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
i hope you are still posting?  ------------------ If Haydn is the father of symphonies...And Mozart is the son of symphonies...Then Beethoven is the god of symphonies!!! |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Ashlerr, This goes up there on my top o' the top list. Everything in it worked well and the spirituality was very dear to my heart. Excellent work. Ex amino JP |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
well written, welcome to the group ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
words from unknown gods sung through siren's lips.... There are many beautiful lines here...and very nicely crafted. |
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ashlerr Junior Member
since 1999-06-11
Posts 23chino hills, ca usa |
thank you all very much for the kind words...it is comment like these that keep me writing...i look forward to reading more of everyones work...it keeps the grey matter flowing :-) |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Some very beautiful lines in here...I enjoyed it a lot!! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
This was fantastic!! ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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