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In Storms |
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Capulet[R+J] Junior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 41Calgary,Alberta Canada |
Hello, just something I wrote a bit ago. In storms was the night that shatterd ground, Thunder that rolled the hills so proud. As lightning drew the light of day, an illusion of the sun that would rise and stay. In darkness do the shadows come, hiding fears for few, and creating for some. Drops of rain that crash the Earth, spew down from the clouds that shake the hurt. An Illusion was the storm that shaked the night, false was the thunder and all its might. Illusions was the lightning that drew the light, and fear was the shadows that striked. Faith was the sun that shined that day, an illusion in faith that the sun would stay. ------------------ Love can be searched for in Infinity, Found within Eternity,.. Lost within Seconds.. |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very beautiful!! P.S. I like your name..I am a big fan of R & J....  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
An interesting poem. I enjoyed your choice of words and verb tenses. |
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Capulet[R+J] Junior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 41Calgary,Alberta Canada |
Thankyou I'm a fan of R+J too, the story, the theme, I think it's great. |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Well done ! I enjoyed this! ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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