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Open Poetry #1

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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 1999-06-25 12:59 PM

My soul is a twisted wreck
Eyes breathe hotly down her neck
Though I'll follow where she goes
Still inside me something grows
Her innocence feeds my hate
Evil thoughts help me to wait

I can see what she's headed for
But I will do nothing more
If she knew what would she say
As if I could turn away
But soon she will find her fate
Evil thoughts help me to wait

Then she turns and looks at me
And we both fall into the sea
All I've held comes crashing down
The fire dwindles as I drown
Though it seems that it's too late
Evil thoughts can always wait

Genea
Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 321
USA

1 posted 1999-06-25 07:46 AM

wayoutwalt,

this is spooky! Wouldnt want to read this aloud in a thunderstorm! :-)

~Genea

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 1999-06-25 07:48 AM

So, try as we might - we're powerless over our destinies, eh? Nice poem, wayout...

[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 06-25-99).]

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