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Sally S.
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since 1999-06-07
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Ohio

0 posted 1999-06-24 01:36 PM


I posted this one in the old forum. I thought I'd post it once more...since it is the one poem I've written that is most dear to me. I promise no other re-posts..hee hee.

His Plan

Silver lines drop from the sky,
Darkened clouds rumble by,
Droplets of life fall to the ground,
A startling crash, then not a sound.

The brisk autumn wind rips through the trees,
Spreading a path of red and gold leaves,
A single bird streams quickly past,
A calming warning, the storm won't last.

Life holds big promise...
One shall not lie on darkened cloud which fill the sky,
Reach out and touch the hand of man,
With multi-colored fingers..which is His Plan



© Copyright 1999 Sally - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
1 posted 1999-06-24 01:43 PM


i like this one thanks for bringing it back for us new to the forum.
Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
2 posted 1999-06-24 02:09 PM


Thank you, Sally. I can see why it is special to you. Beautifully done!

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 06-24-99).]

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
3 posted 1999-06-24 04:20 PM


Sally - This is really very lovely - and don't apologize for reposts - We've all done it and it's quite acceptable - even encouraged when you know it's been awhile since we saw that poem... Don't forget, there's whole new audience here...

Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida
4 posted 1999-06-24 05:21 PM


Very inspiring! Thank you for sharing such beautiful work.
Sally S.
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 847
Ohio
5 posted 1999-06-25 08:38 AM


Walt, Balladeer, Nan and Satiaite,
Thank you all for the comments....they mean a lot.

Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2004-07-04 11:24 PM


enjoyed
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