Open Poetry #1 |
Come and Walk Along |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
See you child alone Walking on your own Hear you say your sins Do you know where you've been I'd like to take you child Walking through the wild You'll see when we are done You're not the only one Who needs to say his sins Child where should I begin You know you're not your own You know you're not alone See your mother cry When you ask her why "Better not knowing When you are going to die" You should of asked her why See the one you love Hide what their thinking of But the eyes tell it's true The rest is up to you You should of asked her why Now your love will die And since she's been dead She fills your swimming head The one who cares for me Waits through eternity I know what I'm to do The rest is up tp you See the wistful wind Whispering from the end Of eternity She's calling out to me Heed her siren's song "Come and walk along" author's note: There is a rampant theme in some of my poems about my mother dying and then she did. [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 06-24-99).] |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I'm sending this up to the top, where it belongs. You did a great job with this one, hope it's seen this time around. |
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Blondie Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 307Ohio |
Very enjoyable poem. I lost my father a few yrs ago to cancer but it was sudden. I know what your feeling. |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Very excellent piece of work, Walt! It saddens me though... ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
A excellent poem Walt |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanx guys and thank you again losty for who (or whom if thats the case) i owe no woe |
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IsabelleSkye Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 253 |
this poem feels like me weird I.Skye |
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