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A New Beginning |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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The veil is thinning Night is gone A new beginning The coming dawn Then so suddenly on the rise I see autumns auburn eyes Where the heavens and earth embrace They touch so gently upon her face She is the fire That's claiming me Newborn desire This flaming tree Silence is broken Throughout the land All are awoken By her hand As she ascends from on the hill Each dying flower meets her will And every time she walks this way They all shall live another day How do I know She won't miss me For I still grow Apart of this tree As she fades My tear stained eyes Follow the glades Where the river lies On the horizon a wondrous sight A lonely lover lights up the night Trust in feelings not the mind For all along we've been so blind To share the sun Emboldens me To make as one Our golden tree |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is very good! I like the flow and the imagery of it. I found it soothing somehow, can't explain why..just that it sort of calmed me! Thanks!  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...um.. yep, I like it too..  |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This one is good, so up to the top it goes. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nice imagery |
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IsabelleSkye Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 253 |
Fall is my favourite season. I like the descriptive way you wrote this poem. I.Skye |
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