Open Poetry #1 |
trippin |
Sic New Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 8brisbane,qld,australia |
tripping on the sunshine blinded by the light and i cannot block the vision no matter how hard i fight it seeps into my head my judgment is so phased im left to stumble round confused and completley dazed but it is my own doing i chose to eat the paper im a recreation user not a drug taker and i keep telling this to my tortured soul as the drugs keep coming my life burns out of control till one day, the flame dies down my life is a gutted shell yes my heart still beats but im already in hell so i end it all finish what i started on another plane, a different existance and my family's broken hearted. |
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dreamy_eyes Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 67 |
WOW! What a emotional poem. I write a lot of drug poems. If you want to read any of them use the search function in the open poetry 8# and just type in drugs and you will find them there. Make sure you only search the open poetry 8# because you will find hundreds of other drugs poems. You express you feelings well and open your heart. You have delt with drugs the hard way and even when you have stoped taking drugs the temptation never goes away. Good luck and don't let drugs beat you! Love Deb -x- |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
emotional write indeed! Im sorry that I'ts taken me 3 years to reply but I only became a member 5 months ago lol |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
Very nice job! You had a good usage of emotional words. I liked it a lot! |
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