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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
My self people cannot see, so this I write to define me. For my self, children are a special joy,I say they are not as part of a ploy. My self fears to be misunderstood and thought absurd so on this I brood. My eye follows a woman's every curve, not in lust but because they are a pleasure to observe. My gaze is not meant to embarrass or as an insult or to harass. The most beauty and pleasure I could hope to find, lies within a woman's eyes. The rare glimpse I get is a special prize. Because the eyes are the window to the soul, to look into a woman's eyes takes all my self-control. To admit to all the little things which I enjoy would have man deny me, an idea with which I toy. My self must stay hidden in my armor, to hide my sensitivity. For I would rather woman label me cold than man label me with disloyalty, a thing untrue to me. My self cannot credit woman with a mind or heart or plea, to do so would deny my armor's reality. DreamEvil (old effort) ------------------ Patience is a virtue, but virtue has never been one of my redeeming qualities. |
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Genea Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 321USA |
nice |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Thank you. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
DreamEvil, Something about this really touched me, I think it is the respect you portray within that got me, so back for a second round for you. |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
You have a gentle side? Sweet poem. |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
Dream, this is good.. ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well now, a little unveiling. Good job. That didn't hurt so bad did it? I laugh at pen of passion there. Well done Dream! But hey, men won't look at you like that. They all see women the same way!  |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
I loved it!  ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I had thought this buried and long forgotten. Shows what I know. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DreamEvil, A sensitive portrayal. Good one. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Dreamer What you said. Me, too. Women make this world one beautiful place to be. No doubt about it. All you feminazis out there... I don't care. I'm wired for visual. Go sue the manufacturer. |
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Rita Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 55Danville Va. 24540 |
i like this one a lot. makes women feel beautiful, and important. the way you see women is in fact splendid! ------------------ "And the day came, where the risk to remain tight in a bud, was more painful than the risk it took to blossom" |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
What happens to the 'ugly' women then?! (Just curious!) You seem so conflicted, DreamEvil. I hope you find/have peace. |
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