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Open Poetry #1

A Little Thing

fjones
Member

since 1999-06-07

Posts 98
MS

0 posted 1999-06-23 06:47 PM

A thong is
But(t)
A little thing
Held
By a string
And
Perhaps a
(K)not

Genea
Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 321
USA

1 posted 1999-06-23 10:37 PM

very funny! lol

Ron

Administrator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-05-19

Posts 8669
Michigan, US

2 posted 1999-06-24 12:18 PM

Short is often good, as I said before. Short and hilarious is even better!

Norma's Jeans

Threads worn thin
To faded whispers,
A dream of what there lie.

Torn and tattered,
Her flesh, white clouds
Peeking from denim sky.

So tight
She couldn't breath.
Nor could I.

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

3 posted 1999-07-21 05:47 AM

thanks for the chuckle

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If I had my mouth I would bite. If I had my liberty I would do my liking. In the mean time, let me be that I am, and seek not to alter me. ~~~Shakespeare~~~

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

4 posted 1999-07-21 06:35 AM

Nicely done. I like a good thong. You could drop the last 'a' and still hold the pun.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 1999-07-21 10:15 AM

Very funny piece with a nice flow

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