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The White Glove |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The White Glove Cannot you see it? That perfect, stark white glove for opera, she is pulling it on just now, slowly, with intent, onto her left hand. Her right hand’s fingers caress lightly her left wrist, slightly tugging, gently easing the glove up her silken arm, then smoothing the gossamer-like cotton of the glove, with her right hand, oblivious, ‘tho it is gloveless. And the art of her is just like a portrait unfinished. ©KRJ 31 August, 1999 ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Very interesting piece... very visual in its simplicity. I really like the final line. Slick! |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Loved the whole thing ... but the last line simply tingles. Brava, poet! Nocht |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
 And the artful Sunshine strikes again...wonderful stuff!------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you..."curtsy"! |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
So I did, I got my courage together and signed up. I have to say you were right, this poem is nice. A picture could not better describe your words. Ellegant, and yes slick. Helmut |
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