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If I Ran Away |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Could you forgive if I ran away? Would I leave you feeling bitter and cold? And if I never saw another day, Would you still love me till you reeked of old? Would I leave you feeling bitter and cold? Would you ache for me if you found me gone? Would you love me till you reeked of old? Would you remember me after too long? Would you ache for me if you found me gone? Would you search for me throughout your lifetime? Would you remember me after too long? Would you dream of me in your sweet night-time? Would you search for me throughout your lifetime? Or might you never even let me go? Would you dream of in your sweet night-time? Wrap your arms around me, calming me so? Or might you never even let me go? Crave my soul for what you find me to be... Wrap your arms around me, calming me so... Lover, please don’t ever let go of me... Crave my soul for what you find me to be... And if I never saw another day, Lover, please don’t ever let go of me... Could you forgive me if ran away? ©1999 Erin Solari ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Comtesse de Chamillart Junior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 10n/a |
I like pantoums...  ------------------ ~the Comtesse de Chamillart~ |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
First, an excellent pantoum but that is a given considering your talent. Next, I for one couldn't forgive myself if a lover ran away. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 this is an excellent format! |
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