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Open Poetry #1

Read me I am Good

THE BIG DUMB WHITE GUY
New Member

since 1999-06-14

Posts 9
BROWNSVILLE, TEXAS,UNITED STATES

0 posted 1999-06-23 02:19 AM

I KNOW
SHHH!
I know
You need say no more.
How do i know?
Because I can see it in your dark brown twinkiling eyes,
because I can feel in in your silky smooth touch,
I can sense it in your sweet intoxicating essence,
I can hear it in your soft beautiful voice,
and because I can taste it on your sugary sensual lips.
With every kiss, word, breath,touch, and look,
I know,
you need not say it.

I love you too!

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

1 posted 1999-07-27 09:36 AM

I sent his one back to the top because I liked the Author's name!! What a hoot !

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Delores Hall
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 342
USA

2 posted 1999-07-27 09:57 AM

I like your style.Happy writing.

Princess Lily
Member

since 1999-07-13

Posts 149
USA

3 posted 1999-07-27 11:13 PM

I liked it.

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

4 posted 1999-07-27 11:32 PM

Very nice!

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks

JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

5 posted 1999-07-28 11:51 AM

I was lured by the title - is there no truth in advertising? No, really... potential abounds here, lets see some more.

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Dum spiro, spero
JP

Newguy
Junior Member

since 1999-06-27

Posts 36
Moultrie, GA, USA

6 posted 1999-07-28 11:57 AM

Great poem and hallelujah to that!

ac
Member

since 1999-06-17

Posts 129
Cayey, PR - USA

7 posted 1999-07-29 05:29 PM

You're right, if you can tell all that without words, you are good!

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

8 posted 2004-08-13 01:58 PM

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