Friendly Punches and Chinese Burns.. A challenge from Giulia

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Friendly Punches and Chinese Burns.. A challenge from Giulia

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

0 posted 1999-08-30 09:35 PM

We settle into the sofa
To watch our favourite Tv show
Suddenly a friendly punch is given
Oh , hell that was one big blow

I look you in the eye
And warn you of what I'm about to give
A punch so hard
You won't be able to forgive

Now we've commenced one great battle
Friendly Punches and chinese burns
Because of our immature prattle
We each won't give up our turns .

Now my Dear, lets not hear you whinge
For your Chinese burns really sting
I feel no guilt, ok maybe a twinge
Did you master it in Peking?

Well sister now I must leave
Our Tv show has ended
Til next week, I believe
By then we would've mended

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 1999-08-30 10:00 PM

Cute! Sounds like friendly rough-housing to me!

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

2 posted 1999-08-30 11:01 PM

I thought this was cute too! Darn those Chinese burns!!!

Skyfyre
Senior Member

since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

3 posted 1999-08-30 11:11 PM

Whew ... I was so glad to read something lighthearted from you ... I was beginning to worry after I read all that sad, bitter (albeit beautiful) stuff you have been posting lately ...

This brought a smile to my face ... hee hee ... think I'll go and rough up my little brother ...

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")

[This message has been edited by Nochtdraco (edited 08-30-99).]

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 1999-08-31 03:24 AM

Thanks so much poet and WhtDove, it was fun writing it , something a little different

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Nochtdraco....Thank you, I'm glad I put a smile on your face.

Oh, and be gentle with your little brother

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

5 posted 1999-08-31 10:12 AM

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 1999-08-31 05:24 PM

Glad you enjoyed it Dream

Thank you !!

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