Open Poetry #1 |
Adrift Upon the Current |
Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
I seek the inner sanctum ...to bridge the wide abyss, In search of my forever, ...eternal happiness. What pathways must I journey, ...what travels must I take, So when I see the glory, ...its joys I can partake? I live in expectation, ...Hoping I will find, Final destination, ...eternal peace of mind. Rivers flowing gently, ...across the rolling plain, I drift upon the current, ...I hear the wind's refrain. As summer turns to autumn, ...portending days to come, I walk amongst the falling leaves, ...what has my life become? My journey soon is over, ...I seek the setting sun, Adrift upon the current, ...The river, it has won. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mike, A solid strike. Straight to the heart of the dream I mean. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! A masterpiece! Absolutely breathtaking! ------------------ Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was Excellent! Great flow, great poem! But great just don't do justice here! Just beautiful!! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
thank you for your comments. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Of couse I love it, you & I write alot alike! It's absolutely exquisite! I love the style & the flow....very very nice, and beautiful content! and....and.....and....and..... ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
A beautifully told tale in wonderful rythym and rhyme |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
everything above and more...very moving...excellent read ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
... a multitude of stars for this one.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
incredible! wow! I love this! |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Going thru the archives I found this .... I love it ....brought tears to my eyes....Hope to see you around the forums....will definitely look for more from you!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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