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Comtesse de Chamillart Junior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 10n/a |
Just toss my heart in to the fire. Burn me at the stake. It hurts to find that you’re a liar... I’ve made a mistake. Just carve my soul in fine pieces. It could not me hurt more. Don’t lighten me with your thesis. Let me walk out the door. Whispered nothings in her ear, You tell me the same. Nothing left for me to fear... No one left to blame. Won’t ask how you could do this... Won’t bother with the time. Just know you’ll never have my kiss, Or the sweetness of my rhyme. ------------------ ~the Comtesse de Chamillart~ |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Ouch! Hurts.... Welcome to our happy home...  ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Star Fairy Junior Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 39cerritos, ca, usa |
very nice |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Wonderful poem! |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Well done! You made me feel the pain. ------------------ Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
What pain! You have done a very well job describing that in your words! Welcome!!! |
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Comtesse de Chamillart Junior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 10n/a |
Thank you all... very much! ------------------ ~the Comtesse de Chamillart~ |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Ahhhh Comtesse...you tell him honey!! Great poem!------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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