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Sue
Member

since 1999-08-04

Posts 383
France

0 posted 1999-08-08 05:18 AM

Leaves are changing hue
Apples on the bough
Cobwebs hold the dew
Mist shrouds the morning now

Skies are turning grey
Nights becoming chill
Migrants fly away
Their summer song is still

Harvest is nigh done
Soon be time to plough
September has begun
Summer's ending now

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 1999-08-08 09:04 AM

This paints a clear picture of autum in my mind

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Sue
Member

since 1999-08-04

Posts 383
France

2 posted 1999-08-08 09:08 AM

Hoot, you're a friend!

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

3 posted 1999-08-08 09:11 AM

Thank you, Sue. I like the Autumn as well. nicely written. It sounds like you live on a farm. If not you must be close to know the routine.

INclan

Sue
Member

since 1999-08-04

Posts 383
France

4 posted 1999-08-08 09:20 AM

Born in a town
Brought up on the land
Not yet quite sure
Just where I stand.

Thanks, Inclan.

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

5 posted 1999-08-09 12:47 PM

Ah, my favorite season...you give a slice of it very well, Sue!! Excellent job, I enjoyed this!

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

6 posted 1999-08-09 07:49 AM

....I like it, I like it....

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Nay, if our wits run the Wild-Goose chase, I am done:
For thou hast more of the Wild-Goose in one of thy wits,
Than I am sure I have in my whole five.
~ ²1592 Wm. Shakespeare ~ Romeo & Juliet ~ ii. iv. 75

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

7 posted 1999-08-10 01:26 AM

i remember that lovely european change of the seasons...*sigh*...not much of that here in CA

moonmoon
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 277
TX , USA

8 posted 1999-08-31 01:44 AM

Brings me memories Sue..Well written..

Thought its about time to bring this back to top..!!

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

9 posted 1999-08-31 02:07 AM

This is so lovely - short works sometimes doesn't it? Any more and it would be overkill - really good job.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

10 posted 1999-08-31 07:03 AM

I'm ready for it now! Lovely!

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