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Open Poetry #1

Your Existence

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

0 posted 1999-08-30 02:18 AM

You were my love
Your love made me high
It kept me young
And made me wanna fly
Over the great Oceans and Seas
To come and get you

I beleived in love
and in dreams
Now your love had died
and mine is dying
God, how we tried
To keep it going

Oh! how I soared over mountains
and layed upon a cloud
I found wonderful you
I was so proud
To have you in my life
and maybe one day
As my wife

Never did I hear or feel you breathe
To know in reality.....
Your Existance

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 08-30-99).]

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

1 posted 1999-08-30 04:05 AM

Dark Angel... absolutely beautiful... made me sigh, wishing I had a love like that...

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."

miriam
Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 323
glendale,ca.

2 posted 1999-08-30 12:18 PM

once again you have left me speechless.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 1999-08-30 04:14 PM

Thank you One Voice and thank you Miriam for your lovely comments

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

4 posted 2002-02-11 06:00 PM

awww dark angel, this is breath-taking.

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