Open Poetry #1 |
From Dusk to Dawn |
Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
From Dusk to Dawn Soft voice, anguished eyes Pleasant smile, but it lies. Emotions locked deep inside, I can see the pain you hide. I pray for strength to find the key: To be the one who sets you free. I need the words to reach your soul. Feel my love, it can make you whole. There’s no need to keep it in. I see the tears you hide within. Get it out, let them flow Only then will peace you know. Let me assist you with this task. I’ll help you remove your mask. It hides a face I love so well Come out of hiding, leave your hell. Soon the twilight will be gone. It’s always darkest before the dawn. Step with me into the light. Bring the day into your night. Feel the warmth of the rising sun Be at peace, you have won. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I very much wish for the peace you describe. 'Twould truly be a pleasure to feel such. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This flowed really well! Very GOOD!!!! I loved the message, actually everything about it! |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wow, nice flow, wonderful message! I enjoyed this a lot!! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Thank you all for your comments. :-) |
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startin_fresh Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 137US |
Great work my friend. You have a gift. I always look forward to your next poem. Congrats on the "member" status. :>) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautiful poem, Tara. Reaches deep into the soul. Michael |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I really felt the love in this poem, This is beautiful Tara. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
The flow and rhyme are excellent! It's a wonderful poem to someone you really care about (stating the obvious here) and I really liked it! Thanks Tara! ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful poem, Tara. I enjoyed this very much. I could feel the emotion. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
yes,very deep emotion shared here!I enjoyed this very much too. |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
BEAUTIFUL..Tara.. Thanks for sharing it with us.. ------------------ "No one was ever ruined from without; The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr |
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