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IsabelleSkye
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since 1999-06-27
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0 posted 1999-08-28 07:53 PM




You


The memories of you



nestled deep in dreams

hands resting across my skin

a stay to keep me near

covering

muffling

secure

legs tangled in a lovers knot

your chest

my head's recline

my hair your silken cover

whispers of sleep

between us

in a quiet embrace of time

no fear

or time

or pain

just you

and I

and love





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God is really only another artist. He invented the giraffe, the elephant and the cat. He has no real style, He just goes on trying other things.
- Pablo Picasso

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caroline
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since 1999-08-16
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1 posted 1999-08-28 07:57 PM


Gorgeous, Isabelle! *sigh....smile* I love it.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
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2 posted 1999-08-28 08:28 PM


So let Eric get jealous! I don't care. I'm glad it's finally out in the open. Thank you, Izzy.
Colin
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England
3 posted 1999-08-29 02:07 AM


OK, so I'm jealous. I'm also about six foot tall, have extremely wide shoulders and strong arms. I throw fenceposts, gateposts and treetrunks around as part of my work. Any further questions? *protective hug to Izzy*

I loved this one Izzy... just like our dream come true all over again!

~one voice~
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since 1999-07-08
Posts 664
Billings, MT USA
4 posted 1999-08-29 02:14 AM


Yes, this is very beautiful! You descibe life so very beautifully!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."



Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
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In the space between moments
5 posted 1999-08-29 02:17 AM


Beautiful work, Isabelle! I love it..

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller



Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
6 posted 1999-08-29 08:19 AM


Izzy,
I'm short fat and dumpy
A bit old and lumpy.
But I still can dance
Would I stand a chance?

A lovely poem.

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
7 posted 1999-08-29 09:26 AM



once
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 16

8 posted 1999-08-29 09:50 AM


I absolutly love "legs tangled in a lovers knot" *sigh* Super writing!
Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
9 posted 1999-08-29 10:34 AM


(sigh) lovely mmmmm......

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Shannon

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