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RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

0 posted 1999-08-28 07:25 PM

I want you
but you're not here
I need you
but you're not near
I see you
in every single place
in every private thought
that I have ever shared
you're with your family now
and that is where you'll stay
but with all my love
I'll wish you
a rainbow
to brighten every day....

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 08-28-99).]

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

1 posted 1999-08-28 11:12 PM

This was so sweet! A rainbow to brighten every day...awe! Loved readin it!

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

2 posted 1999-08-28 11:18 PM

Whtdove is right, very sweet!!! Lovely!

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

3 posted 1999-08-29 03:45 PM

yes...it is lovely

Robin
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since 1999-08-07

Posts 48
Cardiff, Wales, UK

4 posted 1999-08-29 04:28 PM

Yes, I like this too. You can really feel the desperation and confusion. And to finish it with such a positive thought is excellent.

Robin

writer51
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since 1999-08-29

Posts 16

5 posted 1999-08-29 04:34 PM

I liked the passion and force that was evident when reading this well written poem.

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

6 posted 1999-08-29 04:49 PM

Excellent! I like the poem and have been in this situation unfortunately.

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

7 posted 1999-08-29 06:12 PM

Thanks all..:-)) Memory lane ...*sigh*

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

moonmoon
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since 1999-08-13

Posts 277
TX , USA

8 posted 1999-08-29 06:24 PM

Sweet & touchy Rainbow...Loved it..

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

9 posted 1999-08-29 07:06 PM

Living up to your name awesomely!

Talon
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since 1999-08-25

Posts 33
Los Angeles

10 posted 1999-08-29 07:27 PM

Hits home

Nice poem, RainbowGirl, and it's nice to see the rainbow in it

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

11 posted 1999-08-29 07:50 PM

Thank you...he'll never know though, just as he'll never know the little black dress was written for him...but loving someone is such a miracle that even when shrouded in sadness I smile at the beauty of something so magical that touches me so deeply yet so quietly...

HUGS all

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 08-30-99).]

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