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Wayward winds |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Wayward Winds The winds blow wayward salty fresh And lays the salt upon my flesh. The sky is blue the stars abound, My spirit soars horizon bound. My ship flails water to a froth, Powered by the wind, natures broth. I feel so free that I would cry, Just the ocean waters and I. The days are bright and the nights a sight, It's magic to me, day or night. The gifted freedoms wayward bend, It is the freedom I transcend. The raw and the crude set my mood And control to me is my food. It strokes the essence of my soul, Makes me willing to pay the toll. I sail by the powers that be. Ship and skill and grace of the sea. |
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Seaangel Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 167Auckland, New Zealand |
What can I say, Seymour? I love the sea and you've just expressed it better than I ever have. A beautiful series of images that culminate in a dense summary. Wonderful. Let's keep this one at the top. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I agree with Seaangel.Again a wonderful work Sy!!! ------------------ Shannon |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Seymour, I had pictured it as I was reading, and what a beautiful picture it was. Well Done!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Seaangel, Pepper and Dark angel I've been visited by the angels. Thank you all so much for the encouragment. I love you all. |
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