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So Move On...

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

0 posted 1999-08-28 05:14 AM

So Move On...

You want me to set you free
You are free
You were never mine
You never will be

So move on sweet Lover
Seek and you shall find
The one thing you've longed for
That's always been on your mind

Broaden your horizons
Take it all in
Pleasure yourself
And others too

Do what makes you happy
To yourself you must be true

So move on
Skies the limit
Get in there and live
And move with it!!!

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 08-28-99).]

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-08-28 05:19 AM

Very understandable sentiment to this piece. It likes me much.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

2 posted 1999-08-28 04:20 PM

Well done! I liked the message!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 1999-08-28 06:26 PM

Thank you so much DreamEvil and WhtDove

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