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Fight for your man!
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Fight for your man! |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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Funny how your world & dreams .....can be within your reach - And because one person's selfish heart .....is hurt & cannot understand - You trip on your emotions, falling fast .....you lose control... And suddenly the love you had .....is ripped right out your soul. It's like a storm that blows in fast - .....to drench a sunny day The sky is black & thunder rolls - .....your heart breaks in this way. Life is short - happiness sweet - .....be strong & hold on tight... The love you have - the dreams you hold - .....Are always worth the fight ! ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Well said!! Holdin on with all I got! ------------------ "Grief can take care of itself, but to get the full value of joy you must have somebody to divide it with." *Mark Twain* |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
HAH!!! I KNEW we men were worth fighting for - and now I have proof! Great poem, lil Femme |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A few may be worth it! This is exceptionally good!  |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Yes, some of us are worth fighting for, yet the ones truly worth keeping are the ones you never have to go to war over. We surrender with ease and are content to lie in your camp - never to defect. But that isn't where you're really coming from with this. Just adding my two cents and to say that I enjoyed your offering. Well done and thanks for sharing. |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
WOW!!!! This is incredible! the verse that really did it for me was: "Life is short - happiness sweet - .....be strong & hold on tight... The love you have - the dreams you hold - .....Are always worth the fight !" Bravissimo! ------------------ I believe in fairy tales but then I'm just a silly romantic, what do I know? |
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traveler Member
since 1999-08-17
Posts 119 |
Poems like this are why I am so glad to have found the forums ... being a reader and not a writer ... If your love/dreams are not worth fighting for, then nothing is ...thanks again ... [This message has been edited by traveler (edited 08-29-99).] |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
This is a marvelous poem! PFF you are full of wonderful insight and it flows out through your pen! ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
GEESH! All that and brains, too! You're too much! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Nice poem, but you reall don't have to try that hard to impress me!!!  Great job PFF, now if only you can convince everyone that love is worth fighting for... ------------------ I believe in the sand beneath my toes. The beach gives a feeling, an earthly feeling. I believe in the faith that grows. -Stephan Jenkins- |
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Mark R. Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 113San Francisco, CA. |
Great job, You have a way of stirring up emotions in me. It's really hard to deal with the cards that life has dealt you, at times, yet to know that there are still genuine people out there, as yourself and others here, it makes things just so much easier. With this hope in mind we can accomplish almost anything. Thanks again.... |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
Today is my daughters 21st Birthday...and she and I are in a place like this...thank you for reminding me to hold on to my dreams... |
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juanita Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 68Los Angeles, CA, USA |
PFF i'm making a folder with all of your poems, my friends and i love then so much. you are a great!!! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I am also a fan, and have lots of your work in my favorite file. Keep them coming...can't get enough! Could really identify with this one.... found the one I'd fight for. ------------------ Shannon |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Ha! There ought to be a specail place in Hell reserved for all men-stealers-a nice, toasty one! LOL Great job PFF! ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
PFF: Amen!!! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
PFF, great poem. I especially love the last verse. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Fantastic Poem!!! Tis' worth the fight! I too loved that last stanza... |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Yes, love is definitely worth the fight! Exellent, heartfelt work, with a true message, PFF. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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