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the garden |
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markdbarton New Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 4 |
The Garden As the summer days pass the feeling of love grows the closeness never before shown In the garden they had made a love of which would never fade the garden was a symbol of there lasting love something shared to all that would come As the years passed on there came many storms but the love they shared carried them through The storms of life that damage so many the scars on these you could not find any the love served as a protection from wind and rain and also the pain The garden still there even though they are gone but the love once showed remains forever any comments would be helpfull [This message has been edited by markdbarton (edited 08-26-99).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is very sweet Mark. It's a nice metaphor for love. |
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IsabelleSkye Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 253 |
A garden is a beautiful expression of love. As was this  I.Skye ------------------ "I would rather sit on a pumpkin, and have it all to myself, than to be crowded on a velvet cushion." .....Henry David Thoreau |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
I like this... a subject close to my own heart and well written. ------------------ I believe in fairy tales but then I'm just a silly romantic, what do I know? |
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