Open Poetry #1 |
Her Beauty Stunned Me |
Majere Junior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 32 |
Her beauty stunned me. She was someone I could fall for, Talking with her told me that. Smart, witty, flirty, and kind. She had all that I found attractive, before I even laid eyes on her. Her beauty stunned me. As I looked at her photo, Ivory skin with full, darkly painted lips, Flashing a coquettish smile, and mischievous lovely eyes, Framed by that brilliantly red mane. Her beauty stunned me. Striking is the first thought I had. Exciting and absolutely beautiful. My hands hovered over my keys, My mind not able to focus, Forgetting what I was about to say. Her beauty stunned me. We chatted more, I relaxed some, Then we said our 'so longs', And she signed off for the day. As I sat there, staring at her picture. Because her beauty stunned me. ------------------ Such is the way to immortality ;) |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
you put great detail in your poetry. great work |
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