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Majere
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since 1999-08-18
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0 posted 1999-08-26 01:27 PM


Her beauty stunned me.

She was someone I could fall for,
Talking with her told me that.
Smart, witty, flirty, and kind.
She had all that I found attractive,
before I even laid eyes on her.

Her beauty stunned me.

As I looked at her photo,
Ivory skin with full, darkly painted lips,
Flashing a coquettish smile,
and mischievous lovely eyes,
Framed by that brilliantly red mane.

Her beauty stunned me.

Striking is the first thought I had.
Exciting and absolutely beautiful.
My hands hovered over my keys,
My mind not able to focus,
Forgetting what I was about to say.

Her beauty stunned me.

We chatted more, I relaxed some,
Then we said our 'so longs',
And she signed off for the day.
As I sat there, staring at her picture.

Because her beauty stunned me.


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Such is the way to immortality ;)



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miriam
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 323
glendale,ca.
1 posted 1999-08-26 02:42 PM


you put great detail in your poetry. great work
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