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The Song |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
The night sighs a lonely tune. Drumming heavily as raindrops fall in gloom. Echoing my heart's solitary beat, Serenading with mournful bliss. So forlorn did the dark clouds seem, Like all my hopes, like all my dreams. The chilly wind churned and swirled As its icy shroud contracted around me. This world has crumbled into an abyss, Where sounds of happines no longer sing Nor can ever reach. There is only now the song of Despair crying. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Deeply sad...you did a great job on giving me the sense of great despair. Keep up the exellent work! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I found it at last, my dear. Still as lovely as when first I read it. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Profound is the word..Good job verve..  |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Hey all ... Thanx a million for the wonderful reviews. I will definitely carry on writing ... Cheers. |
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