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Loranth Junior Member
since 1999-08-24
Posts 19 |
I wake up alone Seeing nothing next to me. I thinks as i do every day, That my bed is too big for me alone. I miss having you next to me, To feel your body against mine. I long to feel your touch and Smell your hair. I miss the way you laugh, The smile on your face. Hardly a day goes by without Me thinking of you. Love is a bond that can never Be severed by mere mortals. Only God can undo what he makes, And he has yet to unmake my love for you. ------------------ If poetry is a reflection of what is in a person's soul, then I am afraid of what is inside of me. |
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swan Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 58california, usa |
beautiful! Swan ------------------ "I can't go on like this is not a way of telling you'll be mine. Be mine. Like I was walking on your blue carpet. Or am I just being foolish? Or am I just being hopefully yours?" Stina Nordenstam |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Welcome, Loranth ... This poem is exactly what I feel for my love, every morning when I wake ... how did you manage to read my mind..? Hope you won't mind if I ask him to read it too ... ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beautiful work, welcome aboard, Loranth!! I can't wait for more!  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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traveler Member
since 1999-08-17
Posts 119 |
A wonderful poem .. reminding me of that moment in the morning ..as the dreams fade ... and if I lay very still... I can almost feel her presence or smell her hair ... very moving ...thank you [This message has been edited by traveler (edited 08-26-99).] [This message has been edited by traveler (edited 08-26-99).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautifully written...welcome to the forum, looking forward to more ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful poem... welcome! |
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Loranth Junior Member
since 1999-08-24
Posts 19 |
this isn't my normal fare, but it seems to be getting good reactions, so i shall work on writing a few more like this. thanks for your output everybody. ------------------ If poetry is a reflection of what is in a person's soul, then I am afraid of what is inside of me. |
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