Open Poetry #1 |
Wanted To Take A Moment |
WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Lord, I'd like to take a moment, And thank you for Your love. And I'd really like to thank You, For Your guidance from Above. I want to truly thank You, For the friends You've sent my way. Their helpfulness and caring, They show each and every day. It truly is a blessing, Those You've sent across my path. The time they've spent just caring, And being there to make me laugh. For I may not know their faces, Or even where they live. But You know I couldn't of done it, Without the love they give. So I wanted to say Thank You For my burdens that You bare, And sending all those friends to me To show me that You care! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Whitedove....that was really pretty....I don't get very serious often, (gee, guess you'd have to have an amazing perception for the obvious to have noticed), but this was really nice!!! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
as good toerag astutely sayeth this poem is very pretty and astutely i shall say that it is a smile on my face sharing it with you in my mind thanx |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thanks you guys! I appreciate this more than you know! |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Dear Lady, this is a very moving tribute to the Lord. Well done indeed and thank you. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well, Dream, I need to thank you. You are one of those caring friends He has sent across my path! Don't know what I would of done without ya! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thought I'd bring this around once more. To let the others read... |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
this is beautiful WhtDove.. Im sorry I have been replying to youre poetry lately... it doesnt mean I lost interest in it.. just, havent been in much of a replying mood but I still love your work! ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thank you for taking the moment. *S* Very nice! |
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traveler Member
since 1999-08-17
Posts 119 |
Simply lovely ...how much we will miss in life if we don't note the simple things... like the gift of friendship ... thank you |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I think that I'll just "bring this around" one more time. I understand the thanks for the friendship and how much these friendships impact our lives. I also give thanks, but WhtDove said it far more eloquently than I could. Alison |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Every word~~so true. M |
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