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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Love was good then gone quickly too soon, too poignant. How had fifty years passed? He was always mine, I was his. No more. Alone. 12 August, 1999 ©KRJ ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
How sweet and sad this is. So few words and I was moved. Made me think of my grandmother who lost her husband a couple of years ago. She seems to have shrunk into herself, yet somehow become softer. Weird. Death - the taboo topic, is pretty scary, when you REALLY think about it. ------------------ 'Only the shallow know themselves.' Oscar Wilde. |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
That is sad. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you for your comments, Severn and Delores. I tried to simply relate love/life in a very short synopsis of words. ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
So sad .. but interesting structure. A |
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AlCowie Member
since 2011-05-13
Posts 92London, UK |
No wasted words to cramp the imagination here, sad and questioning. |
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