Open Poetry #1 |
Oh-you do?! |
Daddy's Girl New Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 4Commerce, Michigan,USA |
Oh-you do?! I hate it when I say I love you, And then you ask.. oh-you do? Trust me I wouldn't say it if it wasn't true. I feel so much and you don't have a clue, But trust me when I say I love you. I may not be ably to express how I feel, But I know when my feelings are real, To you those 3 little words may not be a big deal, But trust me-thats how I feel. I hate it when we fight, I seem to lose grasp on everything in sight, I try to forgive and forget with all my might, You and I--who knows whose right?? But G.O.D. does it hurt when we fight. I sometimes might over react, It's hard to know the difference between fiction and fact, Saying I love you to me is making a pact, Saying I love you is not some f@*king act. Oh-you do? Yes those words of mine are true, I do love you. ------------------ <---?'s or comments welcome.. ();o).. Daddy's Girl---> |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
An interesting choice of frustration. One that infects all to many marriages these days. Thank you for posting this. I get a sence of being ignored and having to cause a fight just to foster some kind of response. I really liked the line: I feel so much and you don't have a clue... I have surely met a great deal of clueless people in my time. Rave on.... INclan |
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