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Aubris' Revolving Cycle |
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Mark R. Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 113San Francisco, CA. |
Dear Aubri, listen to me, In this I wish to express my love to thee. I hope you will allow me the opportunity, To let me find and fulfill your destiny. And in turn fulfill your each and every desire, So you may add your heart to my burning fire . " Why? Ask me Why?!" For the simple truths you cannot deny, For the shoulder and comfort I lend, when you cry. These terrible beasts within we'd slain, With our tears our pillows we'd stain. I had swallowed my pride, And in each other we learned to confide, In the simple fact, that no matter what we felt inside, There wouldn't be a secret we'd need to hide. Just as the golden splendors of the sky, Is a meer reflection of the beauty in your eyes. ........Can't you see: That your bright smile guides me through the dark.... That your delicate whispers caress my aching heart.... That one breath of your sweet scent drives me insane.... And, that the soft sound of your voice takes away the pain. Allow me to embrace your soul once again....and let us not pretend....that our love has come to an end.... You have been my lover.. ..my confidence, ..my friend, And as I inhale your presence, This viscious cycle just begins.... Once again.... [This message has been edited by Mark R. (edited 08-25-99).] |
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Mark R. Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 113San Francisco, CA. |
No sir/mam, I believe I don't quite have a liking for this particular poem. What are your thoughts on it?..... It was written for someone whom I lost sometime ago. One of those poems, you write and never give. So what do you think? |
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