Open Poetry #1 |
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The Last Petal |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
The Last Petal Sleeping on a pillow of indecision your dreams have sound… A daisy's petals fall as you hear her voice he loves me…he loves me not he loves me…he loves me not Your body turns in the sheets but you cannot escape as she picks up another flower and starts to cry Daisy petals run from her eyes and float away like white butterflies The last petal torn, she's to make your choice your eyes flutter open and you can't hear her voice but the sing-song melody stays in your head like the ticking of a clock he loves me…he loves me not he loves me…he loves me not and you wonder what the last petal wrought caroline all rights reserved ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Oh, this is very, very beautiful. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
How beautifully woven your words are, caroline...wonderful, wonderful work. ![]() ------------------ *Krista Knutson* I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
Decidedly liked. |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
very nice |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Caroline, Not enough fact for what the last petal wrought? Well done. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Thank you all...I am so enjoying this forum. The work here is SO good! It's nice that you send such nice responses to my small contributions. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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