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swan
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since 1999-07-19
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california, usa

0 posted 1999-08-22 03:35 PM



Just one more kiss from your sweet lips and I swear i'll start cryin.
My head is spinin round and all I can hear is you sighin.
I want to know if you love me, so all I need is ESP.
He still calls me sometimes on the phone. I can't tell the future and I can't leave it alone.
Just my luck that your so extremely hot. And compared to you every other guy is so extremely not.
Your still yellin at me, someday i'll do this for free.
But he still tells me i'm his dream, and it makes me want to scream,
When I go back and fourth everyday like i'm some maniac, and every little just thought gets me all hung up and side tracked.


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"You can't make a heart love somebody, you can tell it what to do but it won't listen at all. You can't make a heart love somebody, you can lead a heart to love, but you can't make it fall.--Clint Black


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Denise
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1 posted 1999-08-22 06:17 PM


Very clever writing. I enjoyed this very much!
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