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Starith
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 176
Leesburg, FL USA

0 posted 1999-08-22 12:16 PM


I Need to be Free

I need to be free
My soul must flee
From all of thee
Who try to hold me

I want to soar like an egale
My feet can't touch the ground
While you're around
I soar

My heart, like a bird in a cage,
Longs to be free
I need someone to comfort me
Someone who's touch can set me free

I need the woods, the air, the sea
For these things can set me free
But, just my soul do they release
For my heart remains unleashed

I need someone to break the chains
Which bind my heart where it remains
For then I can be completely free
Please come save me

For it is you who holds the keys
Which release this lock of these
Who criticize and do not see
That, I need to be free!

[This message has been edited by Starith (edited 08-22-99).]

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Starith
Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 176
Leesburg, FL USA
1 posted 1999-08-22 02:35 PM


This is my first post here, and I would like it very much if I could get some feedback, thanks

K.


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[This message has been edited by Starith (edited 08-22-99).]

Skyfyre
Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap
2 posted 1999-08-24 06:39 PM


Welcome, Starith ... I hope that someone sets you free.

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")


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