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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-08-20 05:47 PM


its beating on my mind again,
where is the hollow friend,
i want that craving,
makes me feel small,
thrown around someones rag doll,
but im in heaven,
hell's release,
no more chains,no more leash,
i can breathe,and im alive,
nothing kicking me inside,
the power of love,
has found me dead



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Starith
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 176
Leesburg, FL USA
1 posted 1999-08-22 01:16 PM


Wow an amazing poem...can't believe you've gotten no responces other than this one...

Keep up the good work!

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