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Julie
Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX

0 posted 1999-08-20 05:34 PM


In the beginning
when it was just you,
when all we wanted
was just us two.
You had a sense of humor,
and sadness was few.
We were harmonious with the other,
We never said,..."Why bother."
Your beauty came from inside to out
Your eyes were like a warm blanket
on a cold night 'bout.
Your skin was dark,
and strong too,
It was then I knew
there could only be you.
Your touch to mine
was glorious indeed,
For it is this I hold
and I am freed.

© Copyright 1999 Julie - All Rights Reserved
Emmy
Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 194
KY
1 posted 1999-08-20 06:59 PM


Sweet is the bond between two lovers... very poetically well put
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