Open Poetry #1 |
Enchanted... |
Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Enchanted... I feel your hands massaging away... Mesmerizing my mind. Capturing the essence of your strength, as I become enchanted... By the tenderness of your fingertips. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is lovely! Liked it a lot! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh...I do like this one ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Thank-You, both kindly for your responses, it's very much appreciated. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiicccccccceeee. *G* |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
How could anyone be anything other than 'enchanted' with your Poetry. (Thanks for the replies to my rambles BTW ) |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
suthern, Thank-You for your response, glad you liked it. I was just sitting back on the chair last night imagining the delight I would feel from a Massage. Unfortunetly the fingertips I desired were miles away. |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Oh this is lovely! Like it a lot. ------------------ "Grief can take care of itself, but to get the full value of joy you must have somebody to divide it with." *Mark Twain* |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Craig: Thank-You for you compliment Satiate: Glad you liked it, Thank-You for reading. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
The beach is beautiful. You should have seen Charlie Daniels Band! This is a pretty cool poem. How's my cat? Too bad bridges bum you out. See ya tomorrow night. Lots of nautical stuff to write!!! -dp |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Doreen, Sorry I could not join you, i would have loved seeing Charlie danials Band, that's why I attempted to come over there, I hope I can concur this fear someday. glad your having a great time, Your cat is great, he slept with Michelle last night. Have a safe trip home, We'll be here to greet you I think. |
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