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elvira
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0 posted 1999-08-20 04:05 AM




[This message has been edited by elvira (edited 08-22-99).]

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caroline
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1 posted 1999-08-20 06:45 AM


GREAT! My giggle for the day! Thanks!


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Sue
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2 posted 1999-08-20 07:39 AM


This is a masterpiece! And I echo the good wishes for Toerag.
Dragoness
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3 posted 1999-08-20 08:00 AM


Cute!!!

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Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 1999-08-20 08:27 AM


Elvira,
When you smile or fun
it is so well done. LOL

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5 posted 1999-08-20 11:08 AM


elvira: I love it!!! *G* And I hope you don't mind me emailing this one to Toe... I don't want him to miss it!
elvira
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6 posted 1999-08-20 07:23 PM




[This message has been edited by elvira (edited 08-22-99).]

Skyfyre
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7 posted 1999-08-20 09:31 PM


This was adorable ... I wanted to read one of your poems because I noticed that you gave very thoughtful replies to others I had read ... do you have any other favorites posted that you might suggest I read?

I am new to the forums ... but I have already been swept up in the battle of words between Toerag and Balladeer ... so what happened to Toerag?



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Fred Hobbs
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8 posted 1999-08-20 09:38 PM


Nice going Elvira, I would've probably used it in a payphone but then I wouldn't have gotten a poem out of it. Great rhyme and meter.

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elvira
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9 posted 1999-08-21 04:28 PM




[This message has been edited by elvira (edited 08-22-99).]

moonmoon
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10 posted 1999-08-21 04:55 PM




I liked this one too Elvira..Thanks for the read.. I am still gigglin'

Thanks for all the responses you gave to me as a newbie..I could learn a lot from you..Esp after finding out that,as in my case,English is not your first language..( I got this snippet from 'the alley' y'day..

moonmoon
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11 posted 1999-08-21 04:55 PM




I liked this one too Elvira..Thanks for the read.. I am still gigglin'

Thanks for all the responses you gave to me as a newbie..I could learn a lot from you..Esp after finding out that,as in my case,English is not your first language..( I got this snippet from 'the alley' y'day..

moonmoon
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12 posted 1999-08-21 04:56 PM




Oops sorry.. I posted it twice...That was an error

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