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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
GREAT! My giggle for the day! Thanks! ![]() ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
This is a masterpiece! And I echo the good wishes for Toerag. |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Cute!!! ![]() ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elvira, When you smile or fun it is so well done. LOL |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
elvira: I love it!!! *G* And I hope you don't mind me emailing this one to Toe... I don't want him to miss it! ![]() |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
This was adorable ... I wanted to read one of your poems because I noticed that you gave very thoughtful replies to others I had read ... do you have any other favorites posted that you might suggest I read? I am new to the forums ... but I have already been swept up in the battle of words between Toerag and Balladeer ... so what happened to Toerag? ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (When I hear the bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Nice going Elvira, I would've probably used it in a payphone but then I wouldn't have gotten a poem out of it. Great rhyme and meter. sandman |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
I liked this one too Elvira..Thanks for the read.. I am still gigglin' ![]() Thanks for all the responses you gave to me as a newbie..I could learn a lot from you..Esp after finding out that,as in my case,English is not your first language..( I got this snippet from 'the alley' y'day.. ![]() |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
I liked this one too Elvira..Thanks for the read.. I am still gigglin' ![]() Thanks for all the responses you gave to me as a newbie..I could learn a lot from you..Esp after finding out that,as in my case,English is not your first language..( I got this snippet from 'the alley' y'day.. ![]() |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Oops sorry.. I posted it twice...That was an error |
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