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I am (new version)
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I am (new version) |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England 
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I am your lover and your best friend I wonder, sometimes, how I go on, yet I do I hear your anguish in my soul I see your tears reflected in my own I want to kiss your heart and soul better I am your lover and your best friend I pretend that everything's "fine" I feel my heart bleed as you try to push me away I touch your love and feel it heal I worry that my love is not enough I cry for your pain I am your lover and your best friend I understand your pain, mine is its brother I say get your arse on a plane NOW I dream of the day you arrive I try to be strong for you I hope that you stop pushing and start pulling again, soon I am your lover and your best friend. I was asked to try and write a new version of this a couple of weeks ago. Well, Izzy darling, here it is. ------------------ I believe in fairy tales but then I'm just a silly romantic, what do I know? [This message has been edited by Eric Williams (edited 08-20-99).] |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Eric, this is very nice.  |
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