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Cinderella
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since 1999-06-23
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Arizona

0 posted 1999-08-19 04:31 PM


To hold you and stroke your back is exciting,

Your loud noises make me wild with delight.

We've finally found each other entwined,

For here we are after weeks reuniting.

That other woman appeared at my front gate,

Tenderly holding on to you I almost fainted!

Why did you go with her, what did I do wrong?

Every morn and night you had food on a plate.

I gave you my lovin' and all that I had,

Clean sheets and feathered pillows were there

Containing my warm body for you to lie upon.

Those days you were gone I was so very sad.

Never again, no I will never let you go away

Your wish is my command and happy will I be.

Unexpected tears did surely come quickly,

My dear kitty cat - please never again stray!

© Copyright 1999 Cinderella - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 1999-08-19 04:54 PM


Ahh, you're taking lessons from Balladeer. Well done.

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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



elvira
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
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2 posted 1999-08-19 06:03 PM


i can certainly relate to that, Cinderella...i have one outside cat who likes to roam, she comes home every 2 or 3 days...at first i used to be horribly worried, now i have gotten used to it...give your kitty and extra treat from me
Balladeer
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3 posted 1999-08-19 06:22 PM



Cinderella
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4 posted 1999-08-19 07:55 PM


Thanks for enjoying my little ditty, Sunshine and Elvira! But Balladeer my pussy cat is cuter than yours...hee hee
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
5 posted 1999-08-19 09:29 PM


Just like little kids, we worry about them. I have 3 - I'd like to keep them in one room, but they like it outside too......cute poem.
Delores Hall
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since 1999-07-16
Posts 342
USA
6 posted 1999-08-20 12:20 PM


That's funny,you just remineded me I haven't
seen my cat in a few days.Have to go a look
for him.Happy writing.

Cinderella
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 152
Arizona
7 posted 1999-08-20 03:59 AM


Amazing how attached we get to our purr-fect
pets!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
8 posted 1999-08-20 10:21 AM


Cinderella,
You brought back memories of the one I had for 16 years. Nice job.

Cinderella
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since 1999-06-23
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Arizona
9 posted 1999-08-20 01:13 PM


Thank you Sy, for your comments are appreciated deeply - you are one of my favorite posters in "Passions"
LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
10 posted 1999-08-20 01:17 PM


Cinderella

Yanno
It doesn't take much
To set me off
On a
kitty-kicking rampage!!!
Please keep that in mind
In the future.
I am only a mere man,
Weak in my selfcontrol
Given to rabid visions
Just this once
I'll not write a mean poem
About our feline masters.
But, just this once.

[This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (edited 08-20-99).]
Cinderella
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 152
Arizona
11 posted 1999-08-20 02:41 PM


LngJhnAg: Please control yourself! MEOW
Starith
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since 1999-08-18
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Leesburg, FL USA
12 posted 1999-08-22 01:34 PM


Nice twist at the end...really enjoyed it
Cinderella
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since 1999-06-23
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Arizona
13 posted 1999-08-22 10:07 PM


Welcome Starith to "Passions" and thank you for you comments.
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