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Cinderella Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 152Arizona |
To hold you and stroke your back is exciting, Your loud noises make me wild with delight. We've finally found each other entwined, For here we are after weeks reuniting. That other woman appeared at my front gate, Tenderly holding on to you I almost fainted! Why did you go with her, what did I do wrong? Every morn and night you had food on a plate. I gave you my lovin' and all that I had, Clean sheets and feathered pillows were there Containing my warm body for you to lie upon. Those days you were gone I was so very sad. Never again, no I will never let you go away Your wish is my command and happy will I be. Unexpected tears did surely come quickly, My dear kitty cat - please never again stray! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ahh, you're taking lessons from Balladeer. Well done. ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
i can certainly relate to that, Cinderella...i have one outside cat who likes to roam, she comes home every 2 or 3 days...at first i used to be horribly worried, now i have gotten used to it...give your kitty and extra treat from me  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
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Cinderella Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 152Arizona |
Thanks for enjoying my little ditty, Sunshine and Elvira! But Balladeer my pussy cat is cuter than yours...hee hee |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Just like little kids, we worry about them. I have 3 - I'd like to keep them in one room, but they like it outside too......cute poem. |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
That's funny,you just remineded me I haven't seen my cat in a few days.Have to go a look for him.Happy writing. |
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Cinderella Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 152Arizona |
Amazing how attached we get to our purr-fect pets! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cinderella, You brought back memories of the one I had for 16 years. Nice job. |
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Cinderella Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 152Arizona |
Thank you Sy, for your comments are appreciated deeply - you are one of my favorite posters in "Passions" |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Cinderella Yanno It doesn't take much To set me off On a kitty-kicking rampage!!! Please keep that in mind In the future. I am only a mere man, Weak in my selfcontrol Given to rabid visions Just this once I'll not write a mean poem About our feline masters. But, just this once. [This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (edited 08-20-99).] |
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Cinderella Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 152Arizona |
LngJhnAg: Please control yourself! MEOW |
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Starith Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 176Leesburg, FL USA |
Nice twist at the end...really enjoyed it |
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Cinderella Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 152Arizona |
Welcome Starith to "Passions" and thank you for you comments. |
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