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So my halo's not on straight...?! So what !!
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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I used to be so prim & proper * * I put on quite the show !!  And everyone saw Innocence - But little did they know! Inside my soul was bottled up A fantasy erotic - Look in my eyes & see my fire I can be quite hypnotic ! (LOL) This little angel does have horns - I'm not afraid to say.... I can be oh so ettiquette * * But naughty's how I play ! So many now say,"Wow, she's forward!" I love my sensuality ! ! I'm open to most anything I've finally set the cave-girl free ! I don't mean to offend you - Or scare you all away.... I only try to make the most - Of every single day ..... Our days down here are numbered, and if I can make you smile - I'd say my time down here has been Definately - worthwhile....! ! ***curtsies*** P.S. If you see me in the "naughty" room- You'll probably drop your drink - It's there I post my "better" stuff In here, my rhymes do stink !!  ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet [This message has been edited by poetFemmeFatale (edited 08-19-99).] |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
lol...this was a good one I thought! Loved it! |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Oh run with it girl!  You certainly do make the most of every day, and to me, that is an inspiration. Well done!! **seen the naughty stuff, haven't dropped a drink....yet...almost though!!** |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
Your rhymes do not stink. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
If you change one hair on that head, I'm coming up there to spank ya! Oh, yeah, you'd probably like that, wouldn't ya?! Don't change a thing. You make my daydreams so vivid!! |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
just having read your "pity party"...i am glad to see you snapped out of it |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
PoetFatale, I take back my generous offer to share. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
as usual! ------------------ Sanity is the playground for the unimaginative. |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
LOL, great PFF!! I especially liked "And everyone saw Innocence -But little did they know!"...reminds me of myself, thats for sure!! Keep it up! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood |
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Poetwheel Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 208Canada |
I love flirty poems...to quote Austin Powers, "They're sooo.....saucy! Yeah Baby! Yeahhhh!" Thanks! PW ------------------ Poetic Wheelbarrow http://www.stormloader.com/poetwheel/den.html ICQ: 44370408 |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
"To thine own self be true" Great poem...you do have a flair for flirting that is accentuated in the Adult Forum.... too bad more 'guys' don't jump over there and read you........(hint) |
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CSwtThng Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 124 |
Very good work! Brought a smile to my face! :0 :0 |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Tchtchtchtchtchtch! x several 100 or so. |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
Cute.Liked your poem. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
is my wife lookin is it ok to comment..wow yuh wow |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Beautiful poem 'Miss prim & proper'..(*wink*)I am on my way to the adult's forum to see your naughty stuff... ------------------ "No one was ever ruined from without; The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Don't worry 'bout that tarnish You need not waste your time Polishing that halo Just keep sharing your rhyme! |
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blueloon Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 161NY |
PoetFemme- Your work and additude continue to amaze me each and every day. Everything just keeps getting better! blueloon |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
PFF...at least you have a halo A little crooked, but so what? I lost mine the day I met LJA And haven't found it yet! I agree with you about enjoying sensuality...and being open to just about anything...lifes experiences are worth having in my book!!! ps..where is that "naughty room"? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
PFF, So you have a book on humor and wisdom too. I've looked al over hell for one and can't find any. Loved your poem. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh Lorelei, you're so silly ! Just talk to deVine if you're interested in the "naughty room".....she gives out the directions as to how to get there, and girl, you'll LOVE it !! Never a dull moment! We'd love to have you ! ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Aahh blueloon, your words of praise make me **blush** you're too kind !! ( HA I don't BLUSH!) And to Seymour, no wonder you haven't found it, you're not looking in the right spot....try your underware drawer !! All the answers are in there! he he he And Lawrd knows WHAT else ! LOL ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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