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Open Poetry #1

Too Good to be True

Dom Mart
Member

since 1999-08-17

Posts 164
Florida

0 posted 1999-08-19 08:13 AM

There is a nearly perfect race
Inhabiting the oddest place.
The women are all trim and pure,
The men, successful and secure.
They're handsome, cultured full of fun
And waiting for that "special one":
An SWF who likes to dance,
Walk on the beach, take a chance.
Here DWF and SBM
Can can transform "one" into "them,"
And make a paradise of it,
Full of warmth, affection, wit.
Yes,these are truly wondrous souls,
Citizens of the "Personals."
Such lovely gals and manly guys,
Why do they have to advertise?

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 1999-08-19 08:51 AM

I guess they are pressed for time. Enjoyed the read

Sue
Member

since 1999-08-04

Posts 383
France

2 posted 1999-08-19 08:57 AM

Good question. Good poem.

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

3 posted 1999-08-19 05:28 PM

i agree with Seymour...though exaggeration is common in the personal ads...hardly any one sounds original (same, or worse, in chat rooms)

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