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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-08-19 04:41 AM

Agonized waiting lies before me,
soon the axe will surely fall.
An escape from fate I cannot see,
except rebuilding my wall.

Against me my truths do conspire,
fighting inside my own mind.
My lonely soul burns me like fire,
anything more is unkind.

I was once emotionally cold,
a dead thing hidden within.
I've become so again truth be told,
it only seems to deepen.

I am back where I truly belong,
cloaked in shadows where I'm safe.
For this still peace I have waited long,
chaos had begun to chafe.

©1999 DreamEvil

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

1 posted 1999-08-19 05:04 AM

Dream, this dark, but beautiful. Why would you think I wouldn't like it? I do very much.

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."

Dragoness
Senior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

2 posted 1999-08-19 05:46 AM

Well done,dark as usual,but still well done brother.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 1999-08-19 09:50 AM

DreamEvil,
Some wonderful lines, you have become one of my favorites.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

4 posted 1999-08-19 10:08 AM

Have to state you are a talented writer. But I long to see you come out of this darkness.

Kelly
Member

since 1999-07-03

Posts 145

5 posted 1999-08-19 11:56 AM

I love it. You have captured some of my own feelings and thoughts.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

6 posted 1999-08-19 05:37 PM

Nicely done, DE.....

pen of passion
Member

since 1999-08-11

Posts 234

7 posted 1999-08-19 09:37 PM

You're complicated.

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

8 posted 1999-08-19 10:05 PM

a dark work, my friend. I like it..

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood

Gentle Soul
Member

since 1999-07-12

Posts 273
Vinton,Ohio USA

9 posted 1999-08-19 11:57 PM

*hugs* well written.. I love it brother.. but I agree with Wht Dove...

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Gënt£ë¤§°û£

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

10 posted 1999-08-20 06:11 AM

Complex? Me?

I find myself to be simple and shallow, I think there are some that would agree with that.

caroline
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since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
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11 posted 1999-08-20 06:32 AM

I think anyone who feels things as deeply as you obviously do could hardly be called shallow or simple...I like your writing, dark though it may be. It is honest

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

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