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Open Poetry #1

falling

tamlyn
New Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 8

0 posted 1999-08-18 07:42 PM

falling...

...falling into your eyes
your voice
your smile
until i reach your soul
and feel the heat
...hearing what you say
with my heart
with my soul
until i understand
and hear the beat
...dancing to your song
your laugh
your joy
until the music ends
the laughter fades
...wondering if your heart
your destiny
your journey
will bring you back to me
our dream awaits...

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~tamlyn

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 1999-08-19 01:53 PM

I read this as a dream. If I am correct, let me know.

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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

Sue
Member

since 1999-08-04

Posts 383
France

2 posted 1999-08-19 03:03 PM

I read it as a very new love - is it real? I liked it.

tamlyn
New Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 8

3 posted 1999-08-19 04:02 PM

it is a new love, i wrote it at about 3 a.m.- when i knew how i felt, but not how he felt... a few days later i found out it was mutual! ( my best friend for 3 years!)
:-)we are very happy...

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~tamlyn

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