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elvira
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0 posted 1999-08-18 07:09 PM




[This message has been edited by elvira (edited 08-22-99).]

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1 posted 1999-08-18 07:30 PM


bad,girl. (hehe...couldn't resist)

Actually, I would have to have this one explained to me.

Nan
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2 posted 1999-08-18 07:49 PM


Elvira - Did you read my
"I AM lost and foundering without my rhyme"?

I hereby give you special permission to write a rhyming poem ... no matter what those free versers say........

christies heart
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3 posted 1999-08-18 07:57 PM


I always feel so simple minded when I read free verse and don't understand a word of it! It sounds, however, like this poem is saying something really, really insightful. It "feels" like a poem about the carefree infatuated feeling. But don't ask me to explain why it feels like that! I like it!
elvira
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4 posted 1999-08-18 09:19 PM




[This message has been edited by elvira (edited 08-22-99).]

Severn
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5 posted 1999-08-19 12:39 PM


Huh?


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