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Said as simply as I can
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Said as simply as I can Pause a moment, think of me, Think of how I used to be. Sometimes good and sometimes bad, Sometimes happy, sometimes sad And sometimes, just plain old dad. I held you upon my knee, In times of tears and of glee. Sometimes good and sometimes bad, Sometimes happy, sometimes sad And sometimes, just plain old mad. I loved you well, that's the key, For you're the next nominee. I wish you well, never bad, I wish you happy, never sad And sometimes, just plain old glad. As time goes on, you will see, Truth is always in the we. Good, bad, happy, sad, all threads, Now I live in memories bed, When that be gone, I'll be dead. |
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blueloon Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 161NY |
Interesting and powerful, I loved your use of repetative words. I find that you create much truth in alomost everything you write. Thank you for this tribute. blueloon |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you blueloon your single candle has lit up my night. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Simple, but eloquent. You don't sound like you were much of a plain old dad to me - I don't think plain applies to you at all (And I'm not all that cynical, not really....!) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Why thank you Severn, I think your quite the poet and a wondrful person. |
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