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Toilet Bowl of lies...
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Toilet Bowl of lies... |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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Why is it when you think you have a perfect love at last - the one you love decides to flush - your mind starts swirling fast! You thought you had respect & trust & good communication - Instead you find you've been his fool - Pure humiliation... He took a dump on all the dreams you & him had dreamt - Everything from out his mouth - he's twisted, stretched & bent! Now you find you're sitting in - this toilet bowl of lies - Someone might as well just flush - - - you're starting to attract ****** FLIES ! ******** ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very different! I guess we've all felt like this but you were the one to put it together so nicely! (Now while you're there, if you chance to add some TP, please roll it from the bottom!)  |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
LOL, yep, very different, but I liked it!! Great job!!! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
It looks like you're masking deep pain by humour here (Oh OK - humor). Those men... I knew a man who gifted me with my strength light and love but then the blinds drew over my suddenly startled heart I gasped out for love cried out in the dark but all that answered was a quiet echo of my voice so stark so hurt so left I crawled this beggar, robbed of strength light and love I crawled and I climbed and I'm still climbing yet (Very very off the top of my head...I'll probably cringe later!) I love your imagery - wish we could flush men down the toilet sometimes! |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Amen sister! Any turd deserves to be flushed - male or female! LOL And yes, I was masking pain with humor....and ya know what? It worked, cause I was so MAD when I wrote that, and just from the humor in it, it took my anger all away! Talk about inexpensive therapy, as I always say - writing sure does heal....Thanks sweetie! ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You are certainly very welcome. Have you seen the toilet paper disc. in The Alley? - Very appropriate! I'm off now, to find inspiration somewhere!  s to you. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
I'm still trying to figure out what this tp is, doesn't everybody use leaves??? Interesting PFF, what a wry sense of humour (hehe) you have when you're angry. Please don't ever get mad at me, it stinks down there! ------------------ Sanity is the playground for the unimaginative. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
well now...before you flush...be sure to visit "The Alley" regarding toiletpaper and cast your vote for "on a roll" |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Who could make you feel this way? The CAD!!! Remember....(1) Never love a four-flusher (2) Never love a man named John |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dear PFF, I'm sorry for your pain as sorry as can be It was a painful bane and you had the proper key. You flushed him good and well and sent him straight to hell. LOL *L* |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
I always roll my tp from the top! Geesh, noone does it right.! hehehehe Flush away girl!.. And slam the lid while you're at it! (smile) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Writing is great therapy, isn't it? *G* Thanks for the grins! |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Cathartic release!!! Yes...now am I free from the pain, angst, ennui and sorrow plaguing my frail psyche....crap...another life issue...will the trauma never end.... Opps...thought I was talking with my imaginary shrink. Alicat |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I am a shrink, Ali - keep talking..... ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
OK the title snagged me.. what great vision, you give such inspiration. I loved it.. kind of reminds me of the poem Balladeer wrote in the Adult Forum.. which everyone needs to visit.. (hint, hint) we dont get enough traffic in there. Besides... some of your best work is there PFF..hehe |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was humorous, and I am glad that you could find yourself laughing at it through the pain. If only we could just flush our problems, what a cheap solution! Great Job!!! |
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blueloon Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 161NY |
I wish that I had read this sooner! I needed a good belly laugh! Flush him right down the drain, slam the lid, and then peak to make sure he is gone. Just to make sure flush again! Keep up the great work! blueloon |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Aahh - you guys keep me laughing so much it's unreal....thanks to everyone, and Lucie, I appreciate your comments on my Naughty poems! I enjoy writing those the most, I think!  ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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